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Huaren
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StarDaddy

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2008-05-19 12:11:00

talked to osccf web team. I will not try to fit in their template. pls use this url from now on
http://www.osccf.org/special/2008_earthquake.htm

Huaren
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rachmany

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2008-05-19 12:12:00

以下是引用rachmany在2008-5-19 12:10:00的发言:

very artsy a........let me try


We have to rebuild this place, a land with more beautifulness, more security and more care for each individual,


because, because underneath this land, there buried so many spirits with pureness, innocence and eagerness(enthusiasm)

这个chinglish肯定是不通的,那位大拿再给润色下

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as_still_water

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2008-05-19 12:13:00

以下是引用amychen106在2008-5-19 11:49:00的发言:

我手敲一段文字,你们看,要不要翻译了,加上网页上:


 


我们不能不建设一块更美丽更安全更关怀每一个个体的土地,因为在这块土地下,埋藏了那么多,那么多曾经纯洁、曾经无辜、曾经热望的眼睛。


 


On this land we must build a community that's safer, more beautiful, and more caring for every individual. Because under the ground there were so many so many eyes that were pure, innocent, and hopeful.


 


我觉得我没有把“曾经” 的感觉翻译出来,只是用了were。。。

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rachmany

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2008-05-19 12:14:00

以下是引用amychen106在2008-5-19 11:49:00的发言:

我手敲一段文字,你们看,要不要翻译了,加上网页上:


 


我们不能不建设一块更美丽更安全更关怀每一个个体的土地,因为在这块土地下,埋藏了那么多,那么多曾经纯洁、曾经无辜、曾经热望的眼睛。


btw


我不能不在这个星期开始努力干活了,因为在过去的一个星期里,我基本都在关注灾情,啥都木有干了。。。这


么下去如果被解雇/下岗,就不能继续挖资本注意墙角为四川地震做贡献了

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washer

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2008-05-19 12:14:00

以下是引用amychen106在2008-5-19 11:49:00的发言:

我手敲一段文字,你们看,要不要翻译了,加上网页上:


 


我们不能不建设一块更美丽更安全更关怀每一个个体的土地,因为在这块土地下,埋藏了那么多,那么多曾经纯洁、曾经无辜、曾经热望的眼睛。


Amy, what message do you wan to deliver? I cannot see it clearly in this way of expression.


 


I am a writer and used to be a copywriter for a renowned PR agency. I am pretty good at writing such kind of stuff in Chinese and English. I can help you polish your message if you know what you want to say.

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StarDaddy

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2008-05-19 12:15:00

以下是引用amychen106在2008-5-19 11:48:00的发言:
How to Donate 请加上google checkout http://www.osccf.org/donation_method.aspx?lan=cn

requested code from Dana. will put it on once I get it.
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rachmany

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2008-05-19 12:15:00

以下是引用washer在2008-5-19 12:14:00的发言:

Amy, what message do you wan to deliver? I cannot see it clearly in this way of expression.


 


I am a writer and used to be a copywriter for a renowned PR agency. I am pretty good at writing such kind of stuff in Chinese and English. I can help you polish your message if you know what you want to say.


 here come the pro!

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StarDaddy

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2008-05-19 12:16:00

以下是引用washer在2008-5-19 12:14:00的发言:

Amy, what message do you wan to deliver? I cannot see it clearly in this way of expression.

 

I am a writer and used to be a copywriter for a renowned PR agency. I am pretty good at writing such kind of stuff in Chinese and English. I can help you polish your message if you know what you want to say.

nod. and the page is not for emotional message yet. I think we can wait till a bit later...
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amychen106

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2008-05-19 12:19:00

以下是引用washer在2008-5-19 12:14:00的发言:

Amy, what message do you wan to deliver? I cannot see it clearly in this way of expression.


 


I am a writer and used to be a copywriter for a renowned PR agency. I am pretty good at writing such kind of stuff in Chinese and English. I can help you polish your message if you know what you want to say.


 


是报纸上的社论,我看了很感触。


 


建家园的需要钱,我觉得和募捐网站的主题有些吻合,所以方上来,大家看看合适不?

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amychen106

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2008-05-19 12:20:00

以下是引用StarDaddy在2008-5-19 12:16:00的发言:

nod. and the page is not for emotional message yet. I think we can wait till a bit later...

 


i see,

初始化编辑器...

到底了