以下是引用RedCrayon在5/6/2013 6:55:00 PM的发言：

我觉得这个版本好多了。 隔壁看到的搬过来：

美国朋友帮改好了，注意：正文有限制不能超８００字，所以一定要简练。
我把改过的在白宫网站上试过了，刚刚在８００字内，可以接受。

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Title: Title: Investigate and deport Sun, Shiyan (Sun, Wei)

We urge the immediate investigation of Shiyan Sun's immigration legality and deport her. Possible aliases include Wei Sun and Jasmine Sun.

Sun is the prime suspect of an attempted murder of Zhu, Ling by thallium poisoning.

Sun, chemistry major, remains a danger to society and poses potential threats to America's public safety and homeland security.

Evidences suggest that Sun has counterfeited her identity and used fraudulent documents including false date of birth to conceal her dubious background in order to gain entry into the U.S.

ID: 110102197308202342（Sun, Wei before forgery, DOB 08/20/1973 ）
ID: 110102197310122405（Sun, Shiyan after forgery , DOB 10/12/1973 ）