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阅读写作的那些事
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2020-11-14 12:39:20
楼主讲的太好了。孩子写作经常没有内容,非常贫乏,不会elaborate细节和思想。这个问题应该怎样克服呢?
I was walking in the forest, it was already fall, and I felt cold
I walked into the buzzling forest, greeted with sounds of squirrels scuttling around the massive blanket of fallen leaves. A snake, licking his jaws, hissed in satisfaction with his 5 star-uncooked-fresh-from-the-ground dinner. The screech of a strange and rather big bird, was plopped onto the plate of a brown bear. Large trees billowed around me, and the fall air was fresh with the scent of nature, rather than the car oil you usually smell. A deer raced past me, smacking wind in my face, and reminding me about the fall cold around me.
到底了
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